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A Change

A finger of shadow has touched my soul,
a stroke of darkness has changed my life.

You do not understand
what it is like to dance in the shadows,
how it feels.

You do not see the beauty
that I can
for you are blinded by the light.

I want to show you,
so you may know life
the way I do.

But you resist,
self-conscious of what others think.

You try to bring me back
in futile attempts at persuasion
but it cannot work.

It can never work.

I love this new life,
the way I am different.
The way I am distant.

I will always be this way.
Forever.

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  • i can completely relate to the that, and "dancing in the shadows" lovely !

  • awww

    tht wuz so nice sis! i luv all of urs! like alot! lurves u!

  • ya

    ya sis fight the man! rebellion!


  • In.Your.Arms
    April 13
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    nice. how intense. go goth!!


  • Mademokid
    April 13
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    wow

    nice write! ...

    my fav lines are...

    "You try to bring me back
    in futile attempts at persuasion
    but it cannot work.

    It can never work.

    I love this new life,
    the way I am different.
    The way I am distant.

    I will always be this way.
    Forever."

    keep on writing =)

  • good

    its good sis. lurvs it wats w/ the r u put in um all btw?

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