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Power







I became there
where my first cry was
bonded upon smooth soft cotton
into beneath, but beyond this raiment
I had roiled into breaths
and out only stems

had given birth to each instant of time
gathered, glued them on like feathers off birds I sought beyond air


but you splash me naked to fetal
I feel your heart boom my selfsecreted life

collossal is not the sun







 





 






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dedicated to my beloved Swan

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  • Bad Bill
    April 11

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    As always, well-worded, Danni, but you've lost me with this one - I guess it's just too abstract for me!

    Best wishes,
    Bill


  • Night Hope gold member
    April 10

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    The sun doesn't stand a chance when you're around, Mister...You blind him to his own ways of warmth & light. What a lovely, powerful penning, indeed. Thank you, my Baby.


  • VelvetWings
    April 10

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    Beautiful imagery in this one. I enjoy reading it, as always.
    Thanks for sharing.
    ~Sparrow ♥