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Folded sheets of virtue colored in dusty pink

            Folded sheets of virtue colored in dusty pink
                  Scattered in hazy memories
                    Break fetters of paper clips,
                      Incomplete goodness
                Scrabbles about in crumpled piles
                  Straightening out the forgotten.

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28 words

A contest entry

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  • XxLuckyxX
    July 16
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    I like it. Very thought provoking. A lot of very good imagery in this small piece. You did a great job of putting so much meaning in so few words. A truly wonderful use of the prompt. I am becoming more and more of a fan with every poem of yours I read. Great job here. Keep writing so I always have something amazing to read.


  • individuality gold member
    April 12

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    good imagery, i like the paper-clips here, they are nity little mad things, i wish i had invented them. a good poem.


  • maralisa silver member
    April 10
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    a wonderful take on the promt good luck in the contest maralisa