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A thousand miles away

A thousand miles away, yet you are with me
talking and comforting me with no words at all
I close my eyes and you're all that I can see
looking forward to each night when i can call,

Images of you run through my mind
I can't help but smile when I see your face
this was something I never thought I'd find
a dream I dare not even chase,

Never will I hope to be all that you deserve
I'll do my best to treat you right
my heart is yours without reserve
you're so amazing and such a beautiful sight,

I love you with all my heart and soul
words cannot begin to describe how i feel
years ago it was my heart you stole
now I'm having trouble deciding if this real.



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It's been a while since ive written some poetry.... let me know what you think please

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  • awww this is such a sweet poem! its adoreable and so nicely written! Really great write! Thanks for sharing! =]