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Midnight Sun

And her eyes hold my unbeating heart
she is more then I have ever known
A sun shining through an eclipsed sky
a star burning in my night


and as my fingers stroke her melody
she smiles and rests her head on me
My flower in a twilight garden
a rare bloom of exquisite perfume

My  Cantante of perfect torment
her touch saves me from my mocking self
with words spoken of infinate love
she looks  at me and i am lost

thus in her heart I am reborn
A man.. A slave to her love


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all of the books!!!! god I love them!!!

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  • Nymphetemine
    August 1

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    Wow this is a marvellous write..

    and as my fingers stroke her melody
    she smiles and rests her head on me
    My flower in a twilight garden
    a rare bloom of exquisite perfume

    This verse really stood out.. Tender, sensaul, very moving...

  • LOVED THIS GLAD I POPPED BY oops sorry .. will read on

  • wow this is really good and touching i read all the book too and i loved them their soooo much better than the movie

  • good

    nice write good luck in the contest!


  • Treasure 5 gold member
    April 10

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    Wow this is a wonderfully awsome write. I liked it fingers stroked her melodie. sounds sweet. It was a pleasur to read.

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