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She's a timebomb

I know shes a timebomb
And that She has a short fuse
No doubt, this is one game
That I'll surely lose

Her voice is wonderful
Almost mesmerizing
But not a day goes by when
My concious isn't critisizing

It's emotional suicide
And i know It'll fail
Im not even counting on
Any type of love to prevail

So sick and so tired
Of how all this goes
Will this ever end?
Only god knows

This girl drives me crazy
She wont get out of my head
If I don't quit freaking out
Then I'll worry myself dead

She's nothing but eye candy
With no substance at all
It's these types of girls
That make me stand, only to fall

She keeps me staring
And I stay waiting
But in my mind
Im always debating

Beauty was heavens mistake
The only one It's ever had
Because how could such grace
Ever on this earth be so bad?

It's unimaginably horrific
How sin has such gorgeous eyes
And how such elegance
Could be my demise

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