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Kiss You!

I want to kiss you my love,
On your hands, which write poems out of my love,
I want to kiss thy head, which understands my feelings,
I want to kiss your heart that thinks fgor me, and has emotions for me,
I want to kiss your sweet cheeks my love, which scatter smile on my lips,
I want to put my lips on thy lips,
To perpetuate our love for one another
I love you very much my love!

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  • Dancing Doll
    August 31
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    Wonderful

    wonderful and nice poem sweet-heart

  • twentytwenty
    April 10
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    wonderful

    wonderful expression of deep feelings for your soulmate