The sharper the better, you know.
The less you feel the initial laceration
But the more it burns, that amazing sensation
The quicker the blood bubbles
On that pale, pale wrist
Just a gentle flick, you know...
It's all you need, to feel the sting
That amazing sensation, the pain going away
Filtered out through this mutilation
It's very quick, what you need...
Just hold the razor between two fingers
A swift flick of the wrist,
and you're on your way to paradise.
Pull your sleeves down farther
So no one will ever see the scars.
No one will ever have a clue...
The sharper the better, you know...
Because the less you feel the first cut
The deeper you go...
The faster the blood flows...
The more it burns...
The quicker it ends...
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i know how ya feelz... i have 71 scars on my wrist from only 3 different times
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I can't say that it's not intense, and I am sure you relate to many people with this piece...great imagery and describing words.
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Dudette like WTF! lol
Well you can't do much with blunt things now can you
Nice and dark
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It's very um I can't find the right word... just hmm haha I'm at a loss for words on that one, it confuses me but i understand it. Altogether it tells of pleasure in pain and that is just that! It is very well written and flows very well keep on keepin' on
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Wasn't what I was going for, but thanks
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wow
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