from the bottom of my heart
a fistful of hate
i've tried to find my happiness, but its way too late
i've sold my soul to anger
thats it, the deal is done
now my hatred dwells inside me, burning like the sun
i want to break your smile
your laughter fuels my rage
hatred has consumed me, i live inside its cage
i guess i'll spend my days in anger
until my life comes to and end
but while im alive im must survive with hate as my only friend
A contest entry
- Whats in your heart. by kel dog.
543 points, ended April 11, 49 entries
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Great rhyming scheme; I like how from the bottom of your heart comes something unexpected and unique
Great write; the only suggestion I have is for you to maybe captalize your Is
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