Oh
No it’s
Gone again
Where is my muse
It was here last night
Now it’s nowhere in sight
It disappears; and sure sucks
Days go by I search with no luck
Without warning then it will show up
This is my first Etheree…hope it wins cup
In a list
Please tell me what you think
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JUDGED!
Ooh, never seen one of these before, similar but not quite like this one. Nicely done here poet.
Thanks for entering and all the best to you in the contest
Ken -
hehe I love this! So light and wonderful, very creative. I have lost my muse before, actually I seem to loose it a lot lol, anyway I thought it was wonderful! Good luck in the contest!!
Blessings,
~Michaela~
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This is so delightful and i love the way you put it in triangular form. Just brilliant and quite humourous at the same time. I hated it when that happens to. Well done and the very best in the contest to you.
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awesome
Hi sweet soul,
wow, if this is your first etheree well no one would know it, for you have penned this so well.
I love your sense of humour, us Aussies are well known for it lol lol.The topic of your poem, many will relate to it, including me!And yeah....I hope your etheree does win cup!!
Wishing you all the best in the contest my beautiful aussie AP sis and wonderful friend.
Much love and happiness to you,
~Anne~
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Cuz Lost Her Muse
There's No Excuse!
Perfect form and a subject we all can relate to - that's fershure!
Watching little tiny birdies on the Corkscrew Willow branches outside my window...
Aaaaawwwwwwwww... they are so cute!
That had nothing to do with the poem, I was just sharing 'cause I felt like it.
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Well Julie, I've got Cassie my
on my lap reading along with me.. and she's nodding her approval !! so that's two paws up on this one!!..
she says you should win a cup even though she's not quite sure what a cup is???
doc
oh P.S. I agree with her whole heartedly
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whats an etheree.. is your muse gone fishing again hope you find it lol good luck
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Lol I love it. Pffft @you losing your muse! But a great idea And the form is just perfect>
How do you do that with your firsat one
How clever you are
This is excellent
Best wishes in the contest
Gaylene
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Beautiful Etheree presentation--Well written with good flow of the rhyming verse!
Well Done & Best of Luck in the contest!
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Pretty good Julie, for a first when your muse is lost. I wait with bated breath for the time when the muse is sparking on all cylinders. Good luck in the contest.
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