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Into your hands, my spirit was once.

Did you see me when I wimpered alone
crawling through the dust and rot?
Did you stop my tears and shed my fears
When the truth was all too much?

Were you there when he tore my throat out
and bit into my side?
Were you watching when the poison
slowly consumed my mind?

Did you hear my horrid cries
as I cried out in agony, dripping with blood?
Did you laugh at my fall from grace
though I continuously called out?

Did you even try to stop my lover
from ripping through my chest?
Did you grin as I destroyed him?
Did you laugh as the daemon ran through him, full force?


You weren't there and now I wonder,
were you ever there?
Where are you?
And why dost thou forsaken me?

Why have you forsaken me?

Author notes

from my character Vin's perspective. It goes through his life til this point.

riding on the night train and driving stolen cars. testing my nerves out on the boulevard.

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  • i. love. this. I have nothing else to say. I think this is the best poem i've heard from you at least in a long while.

    <333

    • Thank ya, hun. Not only is it about my character, but deep down it's what i've been feeling for years. Oh double laced meanings. hehe