Material things I never desire
Yet I do crave an occasional rose
Stemmed with love by a caress
Tempered by hot wet kisses
Iced with champagne's finest
Cared by a man of my concoction
Brings me candy from Paris, France
Lures me to his lap with his approach
Utilizes his sex appeal to expertise
Erases my every ponder but him
Author notes
My real name is Marie but my AP name is MysticBlue. I just thought it was pretty when I picked the nic name.
A contest entry
- The Best Prewrites on Ap by Night Terrors.
400 points, ended May 25, 49 entries
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What did you think
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What???
Candy from Paris???? nah you desever the finest swiss chocolate with that rose.
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Thats a great acrostic and the name MysticBlue is a great name
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Hey Sis you're just a romantic at heart ...and a great poem to read tonight ..
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Well thats a tall order...
But I'll see what I can do
Sincerly,
Your AP Hubby
BluesMan
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very original. great work !!
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hmm what an intresting write I really love this it was amazing desire is an odd emotion at times.
The Positives:
I really loved the emotion in this it really made you think.
The Negatives:
Nothing that I have seen I really loved this I thought it was great.
My Favorite Part:
Brings me candy from Paris, France
Lures me to his lap with his approach
Utilizes his sex appeal to expertise
Erases my every ponder but him
Man with candy in hand whats not to like
Overall:
I give this a 7/10 you did an amazing job with this. I am very glad you entered I hope to see you in my future contests.
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The things we all desire isnt it funny we wish for the old fashioned real things and these days sadly is going dutch , lady pays and men are Jocks with pink socks...what ever happened to the box o chocs and pink corsage for the dance ...oh well now me age is showing wonderful write Sis you are a true romantic Poet ....
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