I know who you are
I have found you at last
and I can feel that you are the one
Around you my heart stutters
My mind races
and my words jumble
So how do I tell you?
Look at what you've done to me
you've taken away my numb shell
and replaced it with your spirit
All I ever see is a constant daydream
and you are the star
my star
So how do I tell you?
I need you to know
how my heart aches
when I am away from you
I want to scream
that I love you
to the world
So how do I tell you?
Is this too confusing?
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I think that's what everyone is running around asking them selves. Very good....
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i love this poem,i love the part i wasnt to scream that i love you to the world,i love it
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thank you!
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Simply honest and beautiful truth is shared ..love is around the words..and the essence of the words is filled with the sweetness of the love..well done..
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I think simple words would be quite beneficial to your health in this situation. This piece illustrates feelings we all feel for someone or other throughout our lifetimes. I think it makes perfect sense, and I like your line between every two stanzas because it breaks it up and then discusses it a little more. Great write!
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