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The Other

At the children I am staring
In the silence I am smiling
I know I'm not crazy
I know I'm not that scary
Please stop pretending not to see me
I'm much more than  an "imaginary"
friend.
I am here.

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Prompt #5

A contest entry

how did it make you feel?

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  • Yemassee gold member
    July 19

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    I like this because it is written from the point of view of an imaginary friend, and that's pretty unique I think. It can of course be extended to mean anyone who is ignored. Nicely done.


  • penman gold member
    April 13
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    Wonderful

    Very creative and so well expressed. Best of luck in the contest.

  • I like your take on the prompt -
    It's got an interesting and mind-reeling sense to it, yet it's almost creepy.

    Thank you for entering and good luck!