Transition between life & death;
altered states of illusion,
heat waves melting flesh.
Damned radio breaks.
Pieces scatter
and the same tune plays.
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Prompt:
Blood sonnets and grayed-out rainbows
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Hmm very short, which I like. It was placed together very well. Thank you for entering my contest and the best of luck to you
<3damien
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wow
Amazing...I love the way this piece is strung together.
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ooooooooooh!!!
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so cool
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congrats!
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i enjoyed it even though i can't really enjoy listening to radios. lol
sometimes i turn it on just to enjoy the beat and i ended up 
to the news. 
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Lol, I can understand that
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oh this is fantastic for the promt good luck in the contestmaralisa
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This was brilliant!
Good luck in the contest,
IS your picture Kiera Knightly in the film the Dutches?
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I was wondering who would notice! Yes, it is! I just watched that movie and loved it
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It's so sad and such an inspiring film for woman but oppressing too.
It was so beautiful!
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I agree. I had tears in my eyes after I watched it...I wouldn't mind owning it lol. Everyone that played in the movie put a lot of effort into it
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I cried, shouted, jumped up and down,
NO NO NO NO NO!!!
its just one of those moving movies!
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Indeed it is! Now, I wanna see it again lol.
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Me too it was like there was an apple in my throat the entire way through!
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More so what happened when she had to give up something. I won't say what for viewers who haven't watched it.
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Yeah. It really made me understand what women went through back then. Even though it was "fantasy" I think it was pretty much right on...
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Bang on.
I cant believe what she had to put up with, she had to give up her real love for a man that didnt love her. -
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Yeah. Made me wanna hit him through the TV. Typical mother eh?
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yepp.
I cant believe what she gave away..
CONGRADS ON THE GOLLLDD!!
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Thanks!! I'm still like
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Brilliant take!!! Had the feeling of groundhogs day!!! Same thing just keeps playing over and over and over.......Best wishes!!
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Oh....
I likes your thinking here. Nicely done.
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