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Reflections

Rippling pools of
Enchanted waters show the
Face of a
Lovely girl.
Eternal beauty glistening
Charmingly her eyes do gleam but deep within lies
Terrible darkness and greed.
Infinitely this girl will suffer for her
Overly egotistical illusions
Never will a man love her for
She shuns the light from her mind

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