I sip the exquisite wine from your vineyard lips
my angel my angel bellerose my savage angel
my heart strikes rhythms I've never heard before
I am humbled to be the one you love and adore
tears trickle down my face like a summer spring
I seek silent permission with my eyes to touch
you give accent by your rapturous smile so priceless
my angel my angel bellerose my savage angel
I worship your body drenched from the pouring rain
I taste each morsel of devotion from your essence
I inhale your hair spray your perfume your scent that's you
that makes you who you are and my innermost part dissolves
we have a fusion of hearts and soul forever as we become one
my angel my angel bellerose my savage angel
we grow old together through love's song and dance
we create our own romance on our porch of life
as our grandchildren play we rock and hold hands
my lovely angel my angel bellerose my savage angel
my wife
Author notes
Worship Romance...To My Angel Bellerose...soon to be Savage
Don't die live life
M I C H A E L S A V A G E
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Nice dedication to your wife, good luck
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Enjoyed your poem, very passionate and heartfelt. Liked the repetitive lines. Thanks for entering!
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Sorry about that. i was t esting a theory. your poem is treally awesome thanks for entering and good luck in the c ontest
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I wonder if i can do this because im not a godl member but this box nwont go away
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Awe what a sweet poem to write for your wife. I really thought that this was very sweet. You really did a wonderful job.
The Positives:
Great emotion and imagery here I really thought this was touching.
The Negatives:
Didn't see any this was a great poem.
My favorite part:
I inhale your hair spray your perfume your scent that's you
that makes you who you are and my innermost part dissolves
we have a fusion of hearts and soul forever as we become one
my angel my angel bellerose my savage angel
we grow old together through love's song and dance
we create our own romance on our porch of life
as our grandchildren play we rock and hold hands
my lovely angel my angel bellerose my savage angel
my wife
This part was so incredably sweet I really loved it!!
Overall:
I would rate this 8/10 great job on this I am very glad you entered. I hope to see you in my future contests.
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This was a sweet poem
I liked how you kept repeating one line
"my angel my angel bellerose my savage angel"
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lyrical beatuy
lovley
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A wonderfully romantic write, you two make a beautiful couple.
Well Done....Best wishes in the contests
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you touch me with your love..so deep and so true.. that is why I have said.. I do.. I love you honey
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simply beautiful
Thanks for sharing
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