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hmmmm

lovely thing poetry.
i really dont know what to say.
i guess what i mean
is that poetry is a very helpful thing.
it really makes my heart sing
when i read a good poem it takes my breath away.
i like to read other peoples thoughts and feelings.
it destracts me from my own.

what do u think? im going to go back and make some changes prolly.

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  • robena
    July 21
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    you are so very true. poetry is a great thing, a good way to get things off your chest. nice poem


  • spangler
    April 12
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    yea i really agree with that.