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[ Its the way you make me laugh and smile ]

Its the way you make me laugh and smile
the way you make time appear worthwhile.
The slowness that gives a steadier hand
I've never met a kinder gentler man.

Sweeter words,  I have never heard
melting my heart slowly stirred
and I am becoming so damn frightened
of dull things that you have brightened

What if I would have never known
the things to me you have shown
here.. fear resides within this new marker
once endless nights will now seem darker

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To me finding something of much more worth means the value is twice as much if lost.Still working and rewording. any ideas will be took into thought.

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  • Jackle silver member
    May 27
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    I Love It

    I just read this and it is so romantic but breaks my heart at the end. Love you, GrandJackie