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Head & Shoulders

Feel that tingling?
That's your scalp becoming...
Addicted to it.

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Written March 4th, 2004

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  • TrinityMBS silver member
    March 7, 2004
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    actually... this poems is VERY interesting...

    First I see the surface level... where you think about how tingly your hair feels the FIRST time you use head and shoulders, and you realize that if you ever STOP using head and shoulders, your hair will be even WORSE than it was before.

    Then I thought a bit... well first I saw some comments about scalp massages... I must say I had ONE... he was DAMN good at it. But thats not the point. It could also be the tingly feeling we call "love" which is really cathexis, or lust. TINGLES... that kind of "love" is an addiction- it actually has physical withdrawls (if you don't know what i'm talking about- you're lucky- I think it means your healthy)- anyhow, that was my take on it.

    You're a smart one, horus... you have a strong voice and really speak through your poems... in so few words.

    Trin

  • FaceValue
    March 5, 2004
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    most people probably don't get this...
    Good rushes usually begin as tingles...
    nice little prosaic
    at least you are truthful


  • March 5, 2004
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    I have hair right down to my waist and I'm just anyones if it's being brushed or played with. Shrugs. It's amazing how quickly you can get addicted. Unless of course you really hate it. But then, I'd do it anyway.

    QN


  • BrokenGemini
    March 5, 2004
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    I was addicted, but I did the twelve step program, and now, my head and shoulders are free


  • cvillelisa
    March 4, 2004
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    i love to have my scalp tingled. i'm addicted to that prongy think they sell at the kiosks at the mall. but i'd prefer if someone played with my hair..that makes it tingle.
    how is your scalp?


  • Naughtygrlred
    March 4, 2004
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    addicted to what


  • B2oH
    March 4, 2004
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    Yah? I thought it was because I took a metal collander (the kind your mother had when you were young -- maybe not you, but someone like you) and wired it up to 220VAC. I find it helps jar the words loose when they get stuck. And yah...I kinda like it too.

    Nice dog. Funny looking though.

  • Shannon
    March 4, 2004
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    very nice. I feel it.

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