Morphine shots
Can whisk away my pain for the moment,
But when my soul fails to be purified
Only the whispers of relief you beautifully utter
Have the cure for my eternal misery.
Author notes
My MOM SAID THAT TO ME!! It was the sweetest thing ever!! I cried that night so awfully!! I love her much!! I'm glad I can ease her pain.
A contest entry
- What's the nicest thing someone has ever said to you? by TheQueenOfPoetry.
700 points, ended April 15, 21 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
what do you think??
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Very beautiful words. You two are lucky to have each other. Very touching and extremely emotional.
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I really like this it is very powerful
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i remember my mum in hospital witha drip in her arm where she could press a button and get instant morphine! i want one for xmas lol my mum was having a hip replacement at the time. a good poem.
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great1
I Know it made you happy! Good luck in the contest! The Shaker
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Bella Beautiful
Very good poem. I love the sincerity. I'm glad it eased your pain. Thanks for sharing it with us. And thanks so much for entering. I really loved the last two lines. Great job.
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