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I read your diary

And to my horror
Discovered your legs were fake
Your love valvular.

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Written March 4th, 2004

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  • March 6, 2004
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    Hey, bizarre, I like. You made me look up a word again.


  • BrokenGemini
    March 5, 2004
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    Strange. . . definantly strange. . . we'll say -- unique. . .unique is better. . . I love haiku (because I have a SHORT attention span, and LOVE counting.)


  • Naughtygrlred
    March 4, 2004
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    lol


  • horus8 gold member
    March 4, 2004
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    Disability haiku. lol