you sweep deaths door
with tainted tea leaves.
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A contest entry
- quickie XVI by Salty Hibiscus.
400 points, ended April 9, 8 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Comments
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Well expressed. The use of the word "tainted" fits very well and makes for an excellent image.
Congrats on your gold trophy.

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I think this deserved the gold. Amazing.
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i think it's great!




