those tequila shots wont save you from yourself,
so swallow pride and bite the bullet
this is a day in your imperfect life.
Author notes
6/150
yes, indeed.
this is how it goes...
inspired by bullet 'shot'
and bite the bullet, obviously.
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A contest entry
- quickie; by innocence jaded.xx.
1100 points, ended April 9, 7 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Help me reach my 2000 comment By entering your poetry by Night Terrors.
400 points, ended May 11, 251 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Comments
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wow a great poem even though it was so very short. I loved this.
The Positives:
Almost tragic and pathetic about the person you were talking about. i loved this.
Room For Improvement:
Nothing I can see you did wonderful
Overall:
I give this an 9/10 you did great. I hope to see you in my future contests thanks so much for entering.
~*~Apathetic Poison~*~ -
those tequila shots wont save you from yourself
-I like that=] -
i reallyyy liked this. i love where you took the prompt; very well written. there's so much emotion in this. thank you for entering & good luck! (:
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