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My love is always there

You are the one that I love
All of it
Your words
Your sympathy
Your sensitivity
Your patience
Your smile
Your hugs
Your kisses
Everything I just miss about you
You are always in my mind
Just something I can't get out of my head
A few hours with you isn't enough for me
I just miss you more and more every day
When I am with you is when I'm happiest
You and I together makes the shine
I love you Joey

Author notes

yes I do know it is a little off, but I wrote it randomly without really thinking.I love him very much and I wrote this for him,he probably will never see it though.

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  • Nakatrea
    June 25

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    cute. its a great form. thoughts make for great poetry. nicely done

    I like it very much..even if i'm not Joey

    Kat


    • star girl
      June 26

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      Aww thanks. :L Thats true. But unfortuenly we are no longer together.
      But thanks for the comment


  • lunagirl15
    May 27
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    and more ^.^


  • lunagirl15
    May 27
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    have more applause ^.^


  • lunagirl15
    May 27
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    this is a really strong poem. i really love it ^.^


  • SwimForBetterDays.
    May 10
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    awww this is totally cute. love it!


    • star girl
      May 10
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      Thanks!
      It was a quick kind of poem that i jus made up but its somewhat how i feel.


  • Miss Chievous
    May 2
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    Awww~!!!! That was sweeet!

    keep writing!
    ♥Seasonings(or YourDailyDoseOfMe)


  • angelsslayer
    April 16
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    Yes the rhyme was a little off. It rhymed here and there, but honestly rhyme isnt the most important part of a poem. Non rhyming ones are great as well.. As long as they have the emotion and depth like this one did. It was sweet write, and i liked the way the poem changed its lay out or format.. It was a nice write to read.


  • Soul stealer 666
    April 10

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    Hm?So my little AP sister has a boyfriend now?Since when, why didn't you tell me?Has he did anything wrong?lol sorry i'm just trying to be an older brother.
    Nice write.


  • Sexy Zexy
    April 10

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    Love, sweet love. You may not know it, but Joey might see it. Assumptions get you no where. It is love that is the most confusing. It can blind you, it can make you see the truth. It all depends on certain things in life. Maybe ou should talk about it with him. Seriously. Talking is the best thing you can do in a relationship. Kissing and making out mean nothing if you don't talk. It's all show if there's no real communication. Some of the things you told me before contradict this a little, but otherwise, it's a good write. I hope you guys have something true, and if so, I hope it stays true, because true love is one of the rarest things out there.

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