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What are you?

I never knew
That you were you

To me you were what those people hid behind
When they could not justify why they were blind

I blamed you when I was taken away,
Away from my family, because they were gay

You showed me absolutely no mercy
When society raped me

You sat there and laughed when they said
That my aunt and her lover were legally dead

They told me you loved me and said you forgave
But I had not even the rite to visit my mother's grave

They said that you were God and you would love and except me
But they kept reminding me that I was an abomination for my sexuality

SO I come to you
But I don't really know you

I cannot possibly love the god they have made of you
But in my own time, I will see you?re real hue

Author notes

This is how i feel about god and stuff.... i hope it is what you wanted
Written March 4th, 2004

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  • Abby Eyeball
    March 5, 2004
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    Sad but Strong

    This piece is a very moving, powerful write. As I read it, my eyes were just open wide, and I read every line, glued to the statements you were making. This piece is interesting and sad. How sad. Very nice write. Good luck in the contest!!!


  • Amberlee Carter
    March 4, 2004
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    this is an interesting entry..look forward to seeing how it goes....good luck.
    always,
    amberlee