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Silence

Home is busy,
clstrophobc,
LOUD,
bright,
ch-Aot-iC.

Here there is air,
peace,
and the time to
breathe,
think.

Here
there is the space
to simply

be.

Author notes

I'm not sure about the typing tricks in the first stanza, but I'll leave them in for now.

For a contest, based on an image by Peter Visontay - 'Human Railpropped'.

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  • JinSays gold member
    April 10
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    Simply be. That's lovely hon. Thank you.
    Love,
    jin