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Head Spin

Should have known better,
Why couldn't I see.
That what it is you wanted,
Was never really me.
You gave me guilded wings,
To fly high above the ground.
Then snapped them in an instant,
And left me falling, falling...
I wanted to yell it from the rooftops,
The love I have for you.
Now I moan it from the sewers,
The hurt I feel is true.
You say you never meant to hurt me,
But I feel its all a lie.
You knew you'd kill me when you said it,
Those simple words, "Good Bye."
I feel as though I'm left for dead,
To drown in all my pain.
But if I had a second chance,
I'd do it all again.
So now I'm burning at the stake,
Another martyr to lost love.
But try as I may I can't forget,
How things looked, from up above.

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  • Pancho
    April 21
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    'tis powerful...a little frightening...very real. Good write, for sure.


  • D A Hunter
    April 15
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    Super good, though I've read it a few times before here and on FB I'm finally commenting!

  • cec
    April 9
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    beautiful