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leaving you

i just wanted to let you know
i am leaving tonight
please don't be mad at me
everything is going to be alright
i have to leave now while
my future is still bright
i have to follow my dreams
while they are still in sight
I'm not leaving to hurt you
I'm not doing it out of spite
but when I'm around you
all we seem to do is fight
mom, i want to let you know
i love you with all my might
but nothing you say
will stop me tonight

Author notes

just going though some old shoe boxes from high school and found this

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