As I came in through the door,
tension weighed my shoulders
like it never had before.
I could hear the shower drip,
and I thought perhaps I’d join you,
in a delightful sexy dip.
Hands of love I slid around
and through the foggy heat,
your beauty did abound.
I felt your breasts tighten,
water gathered in your vee;
I spread the damp all around,
and you opened up to me.
Softly pushing, gently swaying,
our bodies meshed as one.
I felt the tension slip away,
as our juices began their run.
With your beauty so well enjoyed,
we relaxed upon the floor,
with the tension now destroyed!
Author notes
Dr. Julia has the cure-all for tension, yes she does, mmm-hmmmmmmm...
Photo by Julia L. Clark
A contest entry
- Sensual Shower Vey Mild Erotic by theredcatjazzoflove.
900 points, ended April 13, 9 entries
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Ahhh good Dr. Julia, she is my kind of MD. Your poem was most enjoyable. In your last verse, I feel you need one more line. withe the tension now destroyed/we will love just once more. "more" to rhyme with "floor" Take care.
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mmmmmmmmmmmm..................... i am just beaming B only f you could see my face i am just grinning to hard this was destroyed is was a very sensual riot damn yu gave me a good shower
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HEY WHERES
A lovely sensual piece enjoyed this cure from Dr. Brazzie
Good luck dear
Passions
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Do you want the shower tonight darling, or shall we "do" the spa? Start the wine chilling, and get some extra towels out...
Love you,
Brazos
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A GIFT FOR Dr. J...VERY SENSUAL
Well Dr. Feelgood has spoken...some very golden words of passion...think I take a shower...lol...well hon you have once agin done an excellent poem...I know Julia will love this one....it'e like a unsung harmony going on, inside ones soul...beautiful...novy
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