Scanning the shallow depths of my soul,
For something that vacated moons ago -
Certitude, hopefulness.
There's no colour left to behold.
Soot-stained, I'm empty,
Lost and searching.
Author notes
Prompt: God
In a list
A contest entry
- My Magic Bookshelf by Emmyb.
710 points, ended April 13, 6 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
What do you think?
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This is a very descriptive poem. I read it twice to take in the depth. Well done.
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I'm empty,
Lost and searching
Because without hope there is nothing. I like the way your poems are short but effective. A talent!
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Wow, thats a short poem but it sure says alot!
Amazing how people can do that. Thanks for your beleif and sharing it with me!
SilverWolf -
I especially like very short poems like this- particularly if htey are good.
You're certainly Irish aren't you, with your giftedness with words etc [teases].
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Thank you for entering good luck and nice poem
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Thoughtful and honest. Thanks for entering my contest!
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What is amazing is your heart is expressed with such truthfulness, one that the Father already knows how you feel, I hope you will seek and find dear. Well written. Blessings.
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Well I agree with the status you revealed for the journey you did..Inded it is a poetically strong verse...well said...
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wow, incredible and thought provoking
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forgot the clappies
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This was very well penned the gold was definitely well deserved.Great use of diction.
''Scanning the shallow depths of my soul,
For something that vacated moons ago''
My favorite line.
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amazing amazing amazing.
you truely have major talent! -
Very nice 'take on the prompt'.
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This is a great write love the second and third line :
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Stunning and well deserved of the gold.
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Well deserved gold. Only by being lost can you be found, only while searching will you find yourself.
Well done
Garrison
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WOW! short and really strong words! very well penned. i love how much your words speak! beautiful!
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This is totally stunning. I loved this.
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Few words but powerful ones..it would take most many lines to describe what you did in a few words..you rocked it!
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Number 13 is : "God"
Take it where you will.
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