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Running Away

Take me anywhere,
Far from here,
I'm sick of everything,
All the words coming out of their mouths,

Like venom,
Taking air from my very lungs,
Suffocating,
Dying,

I need to run away,
I'll do anything just to get away,
Running in darkness,

I need a light,
Anyone anyone at all,
I'm begging for your help,
Tell me that there's something worth staying for,

Too late it won't work,
I'm gone,
The darkness will become my friend,
It's fine you've all gotten what you've wanted,
Another broken soul trapped 6 feet under.

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I don't know what to take from this yet. I just typed, I'm not quite sure if I like it or not.. but it's definitely something..

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  • CourtJester
    April 10

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    Damn, that is good. You should check out Angel-of-Chaos' poem called ressurected or something like that. Alot of deep feeling coming out in this. Just hang in there, it will get better. Sometimes you have to make it better for yourself, which is hard. Good luck!