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Close your mind, close your power to learn?

Judgment shall not be seen the same
from two pairs of eyes, that cross upon one another.
Most everyone seems to play the game,
of knowing better the wrongs of someone else.

Not holding back the tongue that hisses
into dismission, a projection of ones own principles.
Leaving no room for the other to stand and voice
the reason behind their actions, brought by personal experience.

High judge, callous jury, deliberating on what they do not know.
Respect absent, consequently failing to have or even show
any compassion, for which they were once known to hold.
Overbearing blindness has replaced consideration.

In hope that those views one chrishes may in turn help one who struggles,
but what we ourselves do not understand, can not change in another.
Perhaps instead should try to stretch ourselves past our own perimeters
and realize the world reaches far beyond our own, in turn, into others.

Author notes

i dont mean everyone...but some people do...even if not to intentionally be mean.. but some people firmly believe in what they beleive and try to force it on another thinking they are doing a good thing, or some people dnt care about the others feelings and just try to impose their own views on some who doesnt feel the same.. thus that person "must" be in the wrong

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  • hisaddiction
    April 19
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    this is really really awesome!