jealousy turned obsessive
he forced her with heated fury
she wept and screamed
curled in fetal position
flooded him in fiery anguish
and his own self hatred
damned him to the depths
of the bottomless pit of hell
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interesting
"damned him to the depths
of the bottomless pit of hell"
i love when you said that....
thanks for the entry...
this is a good poem..
it is short but..i really understand it
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great poem that paints a disturbing image
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i could feel the heat rise in this intense write. when jealousy makes people do things they might not otherwise, it affects everyone involved.
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