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Questioning Love

When is the time to cry
Is there ever a time to forgive
Or should we just forget
Like our wrongs weren't sin

Is there ever a time to say I love you and mean it
Is there ever a time to say goodbye and cling to it
Knowing you made the biggest mistake
Cause out of everything he was always there to take it

The bullshit and the lies
You told from time to time
You never cared
but now look he's not there

No one to walk you to class
Kiss you on the cheak
Wait for the next class to pass
Just to hug and see

But now he's gone
Your alone
wishing his love was you
What can you say he's moved on your heart is through

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  • CourtJester
    April 10
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    That is so sad. I can feel your pain, the time is whenever your heart and your mind decide it.


  • DeSiBoO14
    April 9

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    DiS iS hEcKa BeAuTiFuL!!InO hOw U fEeL!!iM kINDa GoiN ThReW dAt NoW!!mY fAvOriTe LiNrE:
    "But now he's gone
    Your alone
    wishing his love was you
    What can you say he's moved on your heart is through"

    KeEp Up Da GrEaT wRiTeS!!



  • EvansV
    April 9
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    sorry about your lose from him but life goes on just dont get bitter from this i do love this poem

  • Blackrabbit
    April 9

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    Very cool. I read this as a growing up poem. With deep feelings, and powerful passion. Good job.

    Rabbit