It was in that moment,
that moment I gazed into those eyes,
I knew that these would be the eyes,
the only eyes, I would gaze into the rest of my life.
Orbs of melted bronze,
the way they danced
and the way they burned
with the grace of a swan
I still remember the way that
she was filled with spirit;
strong-willed and free,
similar to a wild horse
Her walk, graceful, refined,
full of power and beauty.
Her step lithe, and confident,
but her personality benign
I cherish the days, the memories,
those long, wonderful days,
where we sat in the stone garden
with the sun shining golden
Her hands, long and thin,
her skin soft, fair, unblemished.
Her complexion, rosy and alive,
expressing the purity within
She had a different view,
more different than any other I had met.
I suppose that's why I held her close to my heart,
she not only viewed the world, she saw it
Her love, always sincere,
was so huge and so great.
I can barely fathom,
what made it disappear.
I now see her from time to time,
in the clouds, soft and pale
Loving the Earth and its beings,
with her tears
Author notes
I wrote this in symbolization of Mother Earth. The woman I spoke of is to symbolize her. I think people need to stop murdering Nature, it's too beautiful to lose and nigh impossible to regain once gone
Comments
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Wonderful write. I often wonder when theearth mother will punish us for the ill deeds that we have exacted on this wonderful planet.
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This is so beautiful, it is gorgeous to see someone taking mother nature in this way and showing us all the obvious which we too easily forget. Well done
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You have tugged at my heart strings with this lovely verse. Many blessings to you my friend in Nature.
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Wow, lovely poem thatnks for sharing
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amazing stuff
I enjoyed this so much that I am like ready to start recycling...even though its hard to do with all my homework
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this is just beautiful. I loved it. You have a wonderful way of expressing how we should all feel.
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beautifully written!
i enjoyed the words you have penned here, my favorite part in this was:
Her walk, graceful, refined,
full of power and beauty.
Her step lithe, and confident,
but her personality benign...
thanks for sharing this with us!
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Our earth has taken a lot pf punishment. Some hoe it seems to go on. Your words well written bring this to light. Every one cares and do nothing. Your words, I am sure will naught.
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hey, that title,? wow, this is like one of those sights we dont get often, and when she has gone, is usually gne for good. quite sad really,
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Thanks for the comment, I appreciate it
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Aweee!! This is beautiful! I love it! I especially love the words & adjectives you used; I understand them all! ^_^
She had a different view,
more different than any other I had met.
I suppose that's why I held her close to my heart,
she not only viewed the world, she saw it
Thats my favorite. That verse means a lot to me. I can relate it to my own life in a way. I've been thinking of ways to sum something up, & that verse gets it all.
& "Loving the Earth and its beings,
with her tears" I love it x]
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