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Emptiness



Emptiness engulfs my body
turning a bright soul dark
withering the spirit held within

I miss his touch,
as I would miss my heart-
-if it failed to beat


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  • Unsigned gold member
    June 2

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    Hmmmm....two in a row.


    You seem so sad..


    If I could hold you I would.

    and share a bowl of soup..

    XXX

  • Superb

    You have expressed your thoughts quite well; a very fine write, indeed. Thanks for sharing this one with us.

  • wow. that has way to much sadness and heartache in it. still beautiful though, just like you <3


  • Mari Goes gold member
    April 9
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    So much longing on those lines...

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