A single feather floating past
Tickles my reddened cheeks
Settling finally; at last
Upon my gardened peaks
Clinging to the greening vines
Protruding from my beans
My finger traces its softened lines
As I wonder what it means
Out of nowhere it appeared
Capturing my line of sight
Forgetful of everything I'd feared
What a powerful, simple might
A simple gesture from God above
Reminding me of his love
1:07 am
09 April 09
Author notes
~It is too quickly we abandoned hope and the faith we have in God, so we miss the subtle signs he sends to show us he cares.~
A contest entry
- Weekend Quickie by A-Solitary-Fantasy.
400 points, ended April 9, 9 entries
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well done!! perfect flow and rhyme....and a simple, yet simply wonderful message. excellent write!!
wyatt xxx
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Thank you!!
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This is too shaweeet!!
Lovely rhythm and flow right through to the end, nice work here buddy.
All the best to you in the contest
Ken
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