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Love On My Mind

Love on my mind
It makes perfect sense
One person plus another equals two
And two equals one cute couple

Mind on my love
It makes no sense
Willing to sacrifice yourself
For another person

Love on my mind
It simplifies everything
Nothing else matters
Except for you and me

Mind on my love
It complicates everything
When everyone hates you
For the person your heart chose

Love on my mind
It's absolutely wonderful
One heart satisfies the other
For time and eternity

Mind on my love
It's absolutely horrid
How someone can love so much
And risk their sanity

Love on my mind...
Mind on my love...
Ugh! Love is so confusing!
...And yet, who cares?

Author notes

This was written for muzik.grl's b-day.

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  • poison ivy 1
    August 7
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    hmm i lieked it it was kool check out my poems!

  • obviously you care... and I didn't like how you kept on saying, 'Mind on my love' and 'Love on my mind' don't hate me, but I hate those over and over again refrains... JUST AN OPINION, DON'T BE HATIN!!!


  • PrincessAralc
    April 15
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    interesting......

    I wonder who....why....hmmm....

  • "its absolutely horrid" just sticks in my mind every time i read this.