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stained blankets left lingering memories
and your piggy bank remaines empty

I held your hand last...

 

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  • Poetic Tasha Moderators member
    April 9

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    great write kari I am glad you decided to leave the last line standing on it's own rather then keep going and it got you a shiney woot woot! well done!

    love light & laughter
    Tasha


  • Oh.My.Juliet
    April 9
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    Very good write, perfect words. Congrats on bronze<3


  • mysticstorm gold member
    April 8

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    So very strong and sad...moving and emotional...well done in strength of brevity.

    Best,
    mystic


  • Lavender Butterfly silver member
    April 8
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    wow ~ grippingly creative with such profound meaning... x


  • Lavender Butterfly silver member
    April 8

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    your prompt is ~ Cradle snatcher ~

    you have 10 minutes to write... Good luck and best wishes to you... x

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