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In the Beginning: Fairy Sonnet I

She has an angelic face
A winsome, caring heart.
She is my living grace,
And won me right from the start.
It was hard for me not to stare
Jealously when she was with a guy.
It seemed to me that guys were rarely there
For either of us, and I oft times wondered "why?"
I had always thought myself plain;
That I didn't feel that I could contend...
And thus from these feelings I tried to abstain.
Yet she made me feel more complete.
Now forever more I wish to tarry
With my enchanting fairy.

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This is my first attempt at this sonnet...I hope to make more concerning the fairy.

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