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My Requisite Poem On Love

All good writers have a view of Love.
I've studied them, I should know.
Love is incredibly oppressive,
Or Love can set you free.

Love is everything and nothing.
A kind word on that day you feel like everything is wrong.
A phone call unexpected that results in stomach-churning
Laughter for all those times you need it.

Love is living
For yourself and no one else, regardless of what "they" say.
Before expectedly Loved, yourself you must
Give in to all those wild ideas we hide from the
World, even if "they" might not agree.

Love is not acceptance.
The world at large doesn't have to care
About you, your feelings, or how you're dressed.
Little Red Buttons don't mean much
In the Real World.

The ones that matter to you in your everyday life should
Love you

For your words, your manner, that skip in your step
That sets their mind at ease, playing Mommy
Or Daddy
Or both.

Love is God. Love is more than God, grander, beyond Him.




Love is you.

Author notes

Did this senior year...learned a lot since then.
Written September 28th, 2002

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  • Airtightchick
    July 13, 2004
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    This was awesome... I can't write anything good about love, and the same with a lot of other peoples works I have read. Good write!


  • jenneddin silver member
    March 4, 2004
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    What a perfect and lovely message... This is an endearing poem and I love it... So many of us get confused as to what love actually is... This one leaves me with the biggest smile on my face.... Thanks and I really enjoyed.