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Reminiscing

I thought you were true
I thought you were real
All good things come to an end,
but I thought you'd be the one good thing that stays

What I thought was good,
was bad in the end
So why am I here pondering my thoughts,
holding on to the past
reminiscing of you
I'm wasting my time

I'm blinding myself to something better
Thank you for this
I'm a heartless in pain,
and its because of you

I had no heart when I first saw you
You taught me how to love
Now will you teach me to let go

I thought good things happened for a reason
But you happened for nothing

What is their to do now,
but sit here and reminiscing
I hate the cold
I hate the dark
That's where you left me

That's where I'm stuck
I cant find my way out
I'm back where you found me
Thank you for helping me out
Thank you for helping me back,
but I hate it now

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  • i think that this poem has some very raw emotion behind it.. i love the way you started it. an other great poem.
    my favourite part :
    Thank you for this
    I'm a heartless in pain,
    and its because of you

    you did well ..