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I listen to your every word

I listen to your every word
just as though it is your last

you breath upon my soul
just as rain upon the earth

the breath of contempt
feeds my soul
as does the love that fills the air

I look into your eyes
just as though the color will change

my body feels cold
but, really the sun beats hot

as you believe this is finished work
I know i have work to do..... 

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  • Angels Whispers gold member
    April 11

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    You have penned this well sweet soul.
    It gives one much to think about.I wish you well with your writing and may your quill never run dry.
    Much love and happiness to you.
    Your friend in poetry,
    ~Anne~


  • faderman1959
    April 9

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    An unusual poem! Full of contradiction, but spoken with so much emotion. Quite passionate in a contracditory way if you know what I mean? Well done!


  • Antebellum
    April 8
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    wow love the flow to this.


  • movedon
    April 8
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    wow. so flowing, so beautfiul, so nice! i loved it. great job

    gypsy