Were crashing
almost eating each other to survive
this world is letting us fail
with our fists punching the walls waiting for it to change
where are we to go now
when theres nothing here to strive off
were suffering in our own misery
our life is depending on it
Everything is down to so little
and so high for us to reach
Watching people try to give smiles each day
after every day shift on the way home
What do you think of this poem?
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The state of this world is so sad at present and yes you are right to write about it as a person who has been here a little longer than you I feel ashamed that previous generations have made a terrible mess yet here is still light and it is up to those of today speak out and bring sanity back ..also our attitudes must change lest the darkness overwhelms us ..you have a wonderful talent with your wordart that shows so much potential and that gives you power so hang in there and keep writing ..it is a wonderful gift
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Thankyou! Very kind words, and helpful
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