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New Day

My loving memory of you
will never fade
because I live each new day
looking at the bright sun and blue sky.

I see your beautiful face
and remember, not in saddess
but forge on willingly
thinking of your embrace.

All the things that remind me
are treasured,
beyond the ache withing my soul
I could never forsee.

But today is a new day,
and I will remenisce and be hopeful
that what we did together
will never decay.


Author notes

My name is Jolene or Darkend, and I am terribly sorry for your loss. I know how it is to lose a dear friend, but just remember that they never truly leave as long as you remember them.

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  • I think this is one of your best poems and has a lot of heart. The word "remenisce" is surely spelled wrong, but I forget how to spell it myself and don't have any suggestions; so good luck with that. Haha. Good write.


  • Jazzlyn
    April 8
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    thank you
    i loved this poem good luck