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Time

In little time someone
You love can be taken away
Your love was never enough to keep him here

Is what my mind tells me
And i cry
Cry tears of anger and saddness

I wanted to keep him alive
I wanted him to enjoy the small amount of time he had
I wanted to make him happy

To have fun
To laugh
To smile

Even if it didn't last awhile
It was still something
But it wasn't enough

He had so little time
But he still said goodbye
And i'll forgive him for that

Even though we can't have fun
We can't laugh
We can't smile

He knows i will be seeing him in a while
Cause his time was cut short
And i'll never be able to hug him

I'll never be able to love him truly
With all my heart
But, thats wat you get for not having enough time

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  • Ok a few spelling errors, but otherwise a very sad and beautiful write. Thank you for entering my contest and good luck!

  • I thought this told a sad story and that makes it a good write.