Ditch the ads, upload images and much more - upgrade today from 5.95/month!
Read Contests Groups Learn Forums Store Help
 

As Wounded Folds Fall Away

 

 

Reluctant to turn around
quickening furtive footsteps
putting distance silently
between trepid thought
and imminent retribution.

Sky releases loose ends
each drifting stealthily  downward

grasping eloquent mime
as it flees in torrid haste
trailing fearful vapour.

Each sting of an extended palm
prostrates itself in victorious etching
leaving it's mark embedded
hell's prominent basilica
sealed on cowardly plinths.

Comfort comes, bidden by choir-ed pleas
released in anguished moments
each one drawn out by hidden depth
justifiably onto life's threshing floor
as wounded folds fall away.

 

 

Author notes

Free Verse, long past memories, healed with time.

Please tell me what you think

    : , Your review:

    Comment Suggestion: What is your your first impression?
    Line numbers  • Invite them to read
    : no Cost: 0 free left 0 points, You have (?)

Comments

  • WoW Katie this is amazing!!! Your words paint such a vivid picture my dear friend. A very thought provoking piece that left me with much to ponder on...Excellent as always...mal