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Memories of the Past

faint and so alive
I can almost see the day
smelling the last hug i gave you
and tasting the last kiss we ever had
feeling your heart beat as we lie awake
touching your face was the last thing I ever did
but I can't believe how faint it really is
as I try to see the memories of our past

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  • Ami
    April 8

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    wow this was really good
    short and sweet
    I liked it

    Great Write and
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