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To the Far Reaches of My Space You Spark Something Wonderfully Haunting (And I Love You For It)

 

 

inandoutandthroughandwithin

I want essences

of a my haunting ghost-friend

to be viable.

 

You're a shock to the chest, my silent stalker,

and I'm gonna slap someone in recoil-

they'll wake up and see a once dead man

can now breathe, can live

more fully than ever before.

 

I know I'd want that kind of Spirit...

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

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permeate, per contest rules

[I have Radiate, by Andy Hunter stuck in my head now, lolz.

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=gj26p8J6ofQ ]

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